User blog comment:Epic~00/AN Review/@comment-27588345-20150803002149

TBH I could've done way better with Dave than I actually did, here's the mistakes I made for the most part:


 * I let him go back to the way he was before mind control too soon. I think it would've been better, if I had Dave slowly but surely return back to his normal self throughout the course of the season.


 * Needed less useless lines.


 * His cameo was poorly done, no seriously I agree with you Epic, it was. I looked at the transcripts the other day and cringed, to be honest his interactions with Sky were a bit much.