Thread:TDWT: Planes, Trains, and Hot Air Mobiles/@comment-31556666-20141120190532/@comment-25126603-20141120234814

Ok I just got a chance to go over it, so here's my input:

So, the general concept is there but there is a few missing things I would add. First, go back over it to see if you supplied enough links, and so. Then, some of your content is very low (but that's mostly because this was an under 1 season interaction, which makes it ok). I would make sure you had at least one direct interaction with each contestant, and i'm not really sure about adding the DJ section. Only because he was never actually in the season (let alone in any season) you just mentioned him which isn't really something I would put on a Everyone Page (It seems more noteworthy for a character page). Besides from that I would say it was ready, and if you want me to check it over again then sure. It would have to be later though I won't really be here today it's my Birthday. ;)