Thread:VeryUnknownFan/@comment-31556666-20141126182710

Hi, Jayden. I see that you've created this everyone page without mine or Ariel's permission, which I'm a little against. While I like that you've put a lot of work into a page like this, and I can certainly see Lightning as the TYPE of character for this, it has noticeable errors that differentiate it from other Everyone pages. For instance, in each episode for a contestant, there shouldn't be a line skipped between each episode. Here's an example that I saw in the "Amy" section.

"He falls on her in Let's Have a World Tour! by accident.

When she is fighting Anne Maria in Australian Rivals, he is wishing that his partner beats the crap out of "dem hoes".

When him and Alejandro form an alliance in the beginning of Aloha, Merge!, she interrupts them and tries to steal Alejandro, which pisses Lightning off.

''Amy tries to enter into his and Alejandro's conversation in London the Ripper, and tries to speak about gameplay with him, but he completely ignores her, since she is not in their alliance. Later in the episode, he is completely shocked that Alejandro is gone over her, and yells at everyone for not voting her out.''

''Lightning goes on a complete rampage in Grand Slam, Home-Run, Hit, Strike, Foul, and You're Out, and as she enters the room with Geoff (hearing his loudness), he goes off on her, accusing her of having an affair with Geoff, and that no one likes her because she is a fake tramp, which causes her to run off and cry. He promises to make everyone (including her)'s life miserable for as long as he is in the game.''

He does not support her in the finale."

This is very short for someone who Lightning doesn't interact with that much. In reality, a section like this should look more like this:

"Lightning falls on Amy in Let's Have a World Tour! by accident. When Amy fights Anne Maria in Australian Rivals, he wishes that his partner beats the crap out of "dem hoes". When Lightning and Alejandro form an alliance in the beginning of Aloha, Merge!, Amy interrupts them and tries to steal Alejandro, which pisses Lightning off.

''Amy tries to enter into Lightning and Alejandro's conversation in London the Ripper, and tries to speak about gameplay with Lightning, but he completely ignores her, since she is not in their alliance. Later in the episode, he is completely shocked that Alejandro is gone over her, and yells at everyone for not voting her out.''

''Lightning goes on a complete rampage in Grand Slam, Home-Run, Hit, Strike, Foul, and You're Out, and when Geoff comes in to see what the noise is about (hearing his loudness), Lightning insults Amy, accusing her of having an affair with Geoff, and that no one likes her because she is a fake tramp, which causes her to run off and cry. He promises to make everyone (including her)'s life miserable for as long as he is in the game. In Gladiatorial Finale, he does not support her." 