User blog:Niksdorfv/TD50S - Preview

Ok. I need your opinion.

This is a preview of my new fanfic TD50 States.

Its a scene from one of the episodes.

IF YOU DON"T SEE YOUR CHARACTER IN THE PRIVIEW, IT DOESN"T MEAN THAT HE OR SHE IS NOT IN.

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As Chris blow his whistle, all campers started to run. "AAH.... what’s the heck?" said Finn jumping from one platform from another '''"Why are they so boiling hot!" '''

Microphone:

'''Ahh! Haven't you heard me, Its called the boiling rocks because it is HOT! '''<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p style="margin:12pt0in;line-height:16.5pt;"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">As all of the contestants barely got out from the first challenge, Nate made it look very easy when he passed it in 5 seconds. "Nice moves!" - Said Nekya, but Nate didn't answer her, instead he started going to the next challenge - The walls of surprise. "I'm sure there is nothing surprising." Viktor couldn't finish his sentence because a giant plastic fist came out of the wall and knocked him out. "You are right, there is no surprise, just lame Chris toys" - said Berry and out of walls three raccoons started to attack her legs.

<p style="margin:12pt0in;line-height:16.5pt;"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Conf*

<p style="margin:12pt0in;line-height:16.5pt;">'''<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Chris: Yep, same old toys. '''<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p style="margin:12pt0in;line-height:16.5pt;"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Conf off*

<p style="margin:12pt0in;line-height:16.5pt;"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">"Hey, James? What are you doing?" asked Ariel seeing that James is writing something in his journal. - "Whoa let me see!" Ariel grabbed the notebook and started skipping pages, and was amazed. '''"Whoa. I like all of the ideas. But, they need a spice.... let’s do all those with...... BOMBS!" '''

<p style="margin:12pt0in;line-height:16.5pt;"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">"NO." said James taking the journal away. And right when Nekya was about to get hit by a giant watermelon, Nate jumped and kicked the water melon, slides down to not get hit my electricity, and did a double flip and got away from the pool with sharks. <span style="line-height:16.5pt;font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">"If he can do it, I can too!" - said Viktor and started running to the 3rd challenge but unlike Nate, he got hit by a water melon, electrified and bitten by a shark. "Yeah...."<span style="line-height:16.5pt;font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> said Viktor and fell right on a start line of challenge number 3.