User blog comment:DerpyandDawn/The Dawnie Confidential I: "Pilot"/@comment-25285054-20140917222514

Yeah, no.

First of all the canonical versions of the characters shouldn't be mentioned or considered at all and yet they are with Tyler and Noah.

Second of all, you have Samey high just because "she was funny" even though she was hardly even in character and did nothing.

Many of them are just "They didn't have decent development" or "they were boring."

The good and neutruel sections are pretty fine but the bad section is where you lost me.